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*** Part 2 ***

----- America's POV ------

"H-how? You're a doll!"

"I was there for you when I was a doll, what is the difference that I care now? That is why I'm here. To care for you. Except now... I can move and talk." she replied with a smile.

Stunned by what she said and that she was even real disabled you from answering. She giggled at your idiotic looking face.

"Don't you start school soon?"

You stared at the clock. 07:54 a.m.

"Dammit!" you yelled and ran out of the room.

------ Your POV ------

You watched Alfred run out of the room and sighed. Feeling lonely. Lonelier than you usually felt when he left for school. What the heck would you do while he was gone? You wouldn’t stand that. Suddenly he ran back into the room.

"What are you going to do while I'm gone?" he asked and he actually sounded worried which in your eyes, was surprising.

"I guess I'll figure something out, you go enjoy school."

"I thought you knew me well enough to know that I hate school..."

"I do know that, that's why I told you to try to enjoy it."

"If you’re telling me to enjoy it, why don't you come with me to see how impossible it is..?"

"Me? In school? I could try, but it would be awkward for me since I can't reply to any of the questions they might ask...

"You'll be fine, just say that you don't know or something. After a few questions they won’t bother you."

"Okay...." you replied, a little worried. You put a foot down on the cold floor and then the other one. "Oh god, what have I given myself into?"

"What is that supposed to mean!?"

"Well first and for all, I will look like an idiot when I try to walk…"

"If you were to fall I'll catch you." The cute American said with a smile.


"I promise" he said and took a step closer to you.

You carefully stood up and took a step. It was unbalanced and you probably looked silly. Biting your lower lip you recovered your balance and took another step. Looking less silly this time. You attempted another step and somehow your whole foot turned to the side and you fell. You close your eyes and prepared for impact when you suddenly found yourself wrapped up by Alfred's warm arms.

"Maybe we should get you some steady shoes before we go anywhere." he said with a grin.

"You think that will help?"

"Possibly… I’m used to walking so how would I know?" He grinned.

You glared at him. Of course he was used to walking, he had been walking his entire life! You on the other hand, who had been human for about an hour, how the heck were you supposed to know how to walk!? Talking was another thing, since you had always heard people around you talk and studied the words and their meaning.

"I’m sure I can figure out a way to walk without shoes. But what about school?"

"Screw school, I’m already late anyways, I'll just call the school and pretend to be sick"

"If you say so..."

Suddenly Alfred grabbed your arm in a steady grip. "Try walking, I'll help you with the balance, just till you get the tactic up."

"Okay..." You said. You took another step but this time it was a lot easier due to the American's help with balance. He guided you to the living room and to the couch.

"Wait here, I just have to go call the school." he said.

You sat down and watched him walk out of the room soon you heard him fake his sickness over the phone.

"He-hello... I-I can't come *cough cough* to school today... I must have *cough* caught a cold or something... Yeah... I'll try... Thanks... Bye..."

------ America's POV ------

You hung up on your homeroom teacher and sighed. Then you suddenly remembered who was waiting in the living room. You ran out there to make sure that it wasn't another one of your crazy dreams, but no, there she sat, looking as cute and clueless as when you first meet her.

You sat down in the chair in front of her, and looked into her [e/c] orbs. 'Is she really real? Is she another one of Arthur’s tricks?'

"So... What now?" Her eyes sparkled as she spoke.

"I dunno…" you said, thinking of all the awkward stuff she must know about you if she really was ________.

"Well, I am kind of new to these features of being 'human'. Maybe I should learn how to properly walk before we do anything else?"

"Sounds good" you said. She took a few steps and then clung to your chair.

"This is so scary... What if I fall and get hurt."

"I won't let that happen." You said. "I'll make sure to catch you before you hit the ground."

"And what if you are looking away the second I fall?"

"I'm the hero; hero's always make it in time." She only replied with a smile.

------ Reader's POV ------

America rose from his seat and grabbed your hand. You felt a fuzz in your chest as he spoke. "I hope you'll learn this quickly so we can go do something fun after this." He said with a grin.

"I’ll try." You replied, hoping not to disappoint him. The two of you walked back and forth in the room and of course you tripped, over and over again. Alfred just laughed at you and wiped a tear of joy from his eye.

"I'm sorry ¬¬¬¬¬________, you just look hilarious."

"It’s not funny! So stop laughing!"

"Give me a good reason to."

"Because I said so."

"Not good enough~" He grinned at you.

"WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE!?" Yelled a voice you remembered from long ago. It was a Britt who had probably been annoyed by yours and Alfred’s 'argue'.

"'Sup Bro." Alfred said in his usual voice.

"Do not ''Sup bro' me… What the bloody hell is going on here?"

"I’m just chilling with ¬¬¬_________, what ya thought was happening?" He replied with the cutest of grins.

"Nothing serious." Arthur said. His eyes turned to you. Frozen, you just stood there as he starred at you. Suddenly his eyes widened. "Alfred, can I speak with you in the kitchen?"

"Fine…" He replied and sighed.

"Don’t bring the girl; I want to talk to you. Alone."

------ America’s POV ------

Your brother practically dragged you into the kitchen and slammed the door after you.

"I don’t like what you are doing here, young man."

"What do you mean?"

"Bringing home a girl with [h/c] hair and [e/c] eyes, dressing her up after your doll and calling the poor girl by its name, what are you going to do next? Do her? You are bloody sick man; I want her out of her now."

"Arthur, you don’t understand, it really is ¬_________."

"That is impossible." He said in an determined voice.

"That’s what I thought! But how the heck I found her on the floor in my room!?"

------ Reader’s POV ------

"That’s what I thought! But how the heck I found her on the floor in my room!?"

'They are talking about me? '

"You found her on the floor of your room and thought it was ________, who had magically turned human? You are dumber than I thought." You heard the Britt chuckle.

'Maybe this was a bad idea..?'

"I didn’t believe at first, but the doll was gone and…"

'I must be creating a lot of problems for Alfred. That was not my intention… Maybe I should leave? Is that the best for Alfred?'

"Shhhh, do you want her to hear you, lower your loud voice for once."

You heard the two of them mumble things through the door, unable to figure out the sayings.

'I should leave; my intention was not to cause troubles for him.' You started heading for the exit, when you reached for the door handle the kitchen door opened behind you.

"Where do you think you are going, miss?" you heard a British accent and you could feel how he glared at you, with a big grin.
I am so sorry for taking such time on this! My mind is messed up currently and I was supposed to post this 2 weeks ago before jumping on a plane but I didn't have the time.... And, to be honest, I have been lazy.... I will try to post part 3 asap....

Part 1 - [link]
Part 3 - [link]

I do not own you, America or Hetalia. But I do own this story.

I do not own the preview image.
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Now I see why Im so confused. Ut was America's pov I got so confused about.
MiruSun Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
What did you find confusing? ^^
BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
When it was America's pov it said 'You' sorry. I wasent paying atention. Great story.
MiruSun Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
Thanks ^^
I tried my best. :P
BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Of course! Its really good!
MiruSun Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
Thank you! ^^
BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
da** you england........
MiruSun Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Oh lol, it get's worse xD
But I see you have already read it, lol
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yup :)
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